Last week Rimu signed up to Night Zookeeper. We wrote a story about a weird sculpture that looked like a head with upside down legs on top. This is my story.
Effective first sentence Josh! How did you chose your characters name? I like your word choices here; 'marvelling', 'Starbucks', 'sluggish' etc. - great job!
Effective first sentence Josh! How did you chose your characters name? I like your word choices here; 'marvelling', 'Starbucks', 'sluggish' etc. - great job!
ReplyDeleteMiss Blair :)